When I live, some problems are sure to
happen. For example, When I was third-year
high school student, I was faced with university entrance examination. I was really worried about it, but I barely could
overcome it by ways of fourth thinking.
First, I studied hard to get rid of my anxiety. When I was third-year high school student, I
studied about 10 hours in a day. The more
I study, the more my confidence level ups, so it was good way for me. Second, my friends and I mutually enhanced
each other until we took exam. For
example, I taught my friend English because she was poor at it. In contrast, she taught me math because I was
bad at math. Also, I shared her sadness
about the test when she felt depressed. Sometimes I talked with her my worries I
couldn’t talk with my parents because she understood my feeling better than my
parents. Third, I talked with my family
or my teacher who are reliable persons. I
felt so much better and got the feeling that I can overcome the problem through
the conversation with them because they often advised me what I should do. Finally, I compared my worries with another harder
problems, for example, poverty, conflict, education problem and so on. When I thought of their stories, I always feel
they are very small ones. In short, I
think these ways are the best way to overcome my problems.

Hey Ryoko,
ReplyDeleteYou should FIRST post this on peergrade.io. Then you will receive feedback from other students. THEN (next week) you will post this here (after you've read what other students say).
☺️Also, 4th is spelled foUrth...
I'm going to un-post this and make it a draft, okay?